this chart does have some cool effects, especially during the break, but the charting itself has too many mistakes to list in a mod. when looking at your patterning its unclear as to what everything is supposed to match up to, and when making denser patterning that really needs to be clear. I will go over the buildup at 00:14.576 just to make it clear what I mean.

• youre charting the doubles to the vocal but it feels off because you set your timing point 5ms too early at the start, leading to you having weird syncopated rhythms where theyre not supposed to be.
• you chart the drums only sometimes, like how you give the kick a double at 00:15.004 but not at 00:16.719, as well as ignoring all the frequent drum rolls
• wrong rhythm at 00:22.933
• your patterning overall is counterintuitive, especially when it comes to more dump-oriented patterns. the vocal at 00:12.862 is a great example of this because the more sustained word at 00:14.147 is charted the same way as all the shorter words and the word 00:13.076 doesnt have any grace notes at all. its confusing because it actively goes against your brain trying to break the notes into patterns. you also missed a word at 00:13.612.